RE: Your Submission - "Weather" by Chelsea Allen

How the editorial sausage gets made.

Welcome to our first ‘RE: Your Submission’ where editors Autumn Watts (ex-fiction editor for Guernica) and Steve Chang (fiction editor for Okay Donkey) publicly breakdown and provide feedback on a story submitted by our subscribers, offering craft tips and editorial insights along the way.

Steve & Autumn manage Submitter’s Club for Chill Subs and offer …